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lazuline_castellan ([personal profile] lazuline_castellan) wrote2010-07-23 10:32 pm

OJ (1. Yoroshiku!)

Title: Orange Juice (Just another love story?)
Author: ruilian_thatsme
Characters/Pairing:
Ninomiya Kazunari / OC, Akanishi Jin / OC
Length: Chaptered
Summary: From a dying faith to a wishful heart. Who says cheesy love stories only happen in dramas? One bottle of orange juice starts it all. Never give up! Keep moving forward. ^_^!
A/N: This is my first nino fic. I used PSP referring to anchan's DS. teehee  , ii desu ka?
oh, there are a number of jap phrases here, if there's anything i forgot to put trans, just tell me...^^ Enjoy! Have a Wishful Heart! ^_._^

           

 

Yoroshiku! (Please to meet you!)

 

            His PSP almost went flying as he landed hard on the pavement. He turned to look at what cause his fall and found a foot of a girl slumped on the wall of the store. She was pale and her eyes are closed, around her was a bunch of advertising posters.

            “Oi, Daijoubu ka?(are you alright?)” he asked, patting the girl’s shoulder.

No response.

She was in cold sweat. The sun was beating down hard.

He looked around for help but no one was near to even bother. He felt around for his phone but he couldn’t find it. He decided to move her to the shaded side of the store building and fanned her with the posters lying around. He noticed that they were a familiar ad.

She finally stirred after a while. Her eyes opened slowly.

            “A-re? Dare?(who?)” she inquired as her vision cleared up when she’s regained consciousness and tried to sit up straight. She looked around and gasped at the site of the posters lying everywhere.           

            “Oh no! My boss is going to kill me when she sees this.” She started gathering them into neat piles.

            “Ano, are you alright? Don’t you need to go to the hospital?” he asked as he helped her pick up.

            “Huh? Oh, I’m fine. That usually happens. The heat was getting to me, that’s all.” She assured him, she thought he looked familiar then she realized that she hasn’t thanked him.

            “Mooshiawake guzaimsen!(i'm sorry) Hontou arigatou guzaimasu! I’m sorry to have troubled you. I’ll be able to take care of this. Mou daijoubu desu.(i'm fine now.)” She bowed her head.

            “Hontou?(really?) Ja, ki otsukeru ne.(take care)” he said as he handed her the posters and turned to leave then stopped in his tracks, looked back at her and said, “Ganbarre!(do your best)”.

            “Hai, arigatou.(yes, thanks)” She said. They went on separate ways.

 

***

            “Anata!(you) What are you doing here?” he asked bewildered when they met again, this time at work.

            “A-re? You two know each other already?” Dita asked them looking from one to the other.

            “Not really, I saw her this morning.” He replied.

            “He helped me when I had my fainting spells again. Ano, Hontou ni arigatou. Watashi no namae wa Shiyama Rin desu. Yoroshiku onegai shimasu.(Um,thank you very much, my name is Shiyama Rin. please to meet you.)” Rin introduced herself and reassured Dita who immediately looked worried upon hearing her illness acting up again. She realized why he looked so familiar before.

“She’s my best friend, she works here now. She’s in the advertising department.” Dita explained. “Thank you for taking care of her.”

 “He’s the guitarist of the band, Niji, this company has produced.” Dita continued.

“Boku wa Nino desu(i'm nino). Kazunari Ninomiya, haijimemashite.(please to meet you.)” taking his turn for self introduction.

            “Oh yeah! Ninomiya-kun is an otaku and so is Rin-chan! You should get along well.” Dita teased. “That reminds me, besides guitar, Nino only has his PSP on his hands, it surprised me that you even noticed her this morning.” Dita continued eyeing him suspiciously.

            “Uhh, actually, my PSP went flying went I tripped over her foot dakara(that's why)…” Nino admitted sheepishly.

            “Yappari.” Dita said triumphantly.

            “Gomen Nasai!(sorry) I didn’t know. I didn’t mean to trip anybody.” Rin bowed her head looking horrified.

            “Wakattemasu yo (I get it). Heki heki(Fine). Shimpai sonna.(no worries)” He said accepting her apology and amused at her reaction. “So, you’re also an otaku huh?” he asked to lighten her up. It worked. Dita left them babbling about anime stuffs.

 

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 Next chapter....

[identity profile] raindrop-symph.livejournal.com 2010-07-23 02:36 pm (UTC)(link)
nalingaw kaayo ka og update?

[identity profile] raindrop-symph.livejournal.com 2010-07-23 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
wala pa di ai ka nalingaw ana na level?

[identity profile] ruilian-thatsme.livejournal.com 2010-07-24 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
hehe, maa maa... mas lingaw man magbasa and magreply sa comments! lol
nag struggle pud baya ko ug post...

(Anonymous) 2010-07-24 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
unni!!???i thOUght You WEre AOINg bACk TO HeeCHul???

[identity profile] ruilian-thatsme.livejournal.com 2010-07-24 03:49 pm (UTC)(link)
who says i left any of my husbands?!! ;p

[identity profile] tenshii-chan.livejournal.com 2010-07-26 07:41 am (UTC)(link)
ehhh? the story is good,, demO~ pwede po i-limit yung japanese phrases.. minsan kasi hindi naiintindihan ng ibang readers (one of my friend refer this to me),. its get too annoying if we try to incorporate japanese phrases which when improperly used, the story gets too misleading.. alam mo yung "conyo" na tinatawag sa tagalog? nagiging ganun yung story^^

mah~ ki ni shinaide kudasai.., its just my opinion anyway..

anata ga sugoi dayo^^

[identity profile] ruilian-thatsme.livejournal.com 2010-07-26 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
Gomen nasai! I was thinking of adding a somewhat glossary at the end or trans right after the phrases... i asked some people kasi, they said it's understandable pa rin naman daw... Thanks so much for that, i'll add in some trans...^^

[identity profile] tenshii-chan.livejournal.com 2010-07-26 08:15 am (UTC)(link)
ahaha, oo naman, naintindihan ko din naman. Personally walang problema sakin. I just commented for the sake of my friend who understand a little english, how much more if the fic has so many japanese? i guess that's a better idea^^ para mas madaming magbasa^^ ganbare^^

[identity profile] ruilian-thatsme.livejournal.com 2010-07-26 09:36 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, i'm actually currently putting trans na...i've got a long way to go... hehe hope it also helps readers learn jap... tama ba use of jap ko? hehe

[identity profile] tenshii-chan.livejournal.com 2010-07-26 10:09 am (UTC)(link)
yep..ahaha^^

although some phrases seemed very formal,, pero ayos lang yun.. 'coz when you are learning japanese, it always starts with basic and formal phrases mga latter parts na ung mga conventional phrase at everyday conversations..

Mooshiawake guzaimsen" nowadays medyo di na yun ginagamit....but if your story wanted to emphasized the strong formality between the two characters, then its okay^^.. ayun,,

[identity profile] ruilian-thatsme.livejournal.com 2010-07-26 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
yeah, i agree, first meeting kasi nila yun...alam mo nahirapan akong mag lagay ng trans sa "itadakimasu" hehe paano ba yun in lay man's terms?...yung iba i used and trans according to how i understood it...^^ i'm not even halfway there in posting the rest of the chapters... *sigh* ^^ Maa, ii desu yo ne... ganbaremasu!

[identity profile] tenshii-chan.livejournal.com 2010-07-26 11:55 am (UTC)(link)
oh, dont worry about that dearie, you just have to put "phrase utter/use by japanese before eating"
or a friend told me, it was nearly like saying "thanks for the food.."
anyway.. kaya mo yan^^ don't push yourself too much

[identity profile] ruilian-thatsme.livejournal.com 2010-07-26 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Arigatou! i think i'll use that... hehe

[identity profile] ruilian-thatsme.livejournal.com 2010-07-27 05:54 am (UTC)(link)
Hai!^^ arigatou!

[identity profile] ruilian-thatsme.livejournal.com 2010-08-07 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
Finally done Posting all the OJ chaps! ^^ otsukare sama Rin! ^^ Arigatou! teehee!